Three Highlights of my Pitch

We got two offers from the venture capitalists.
Mr. Tenhaken lowered lowered our interest price from $7.00 to $5.00. But we have to give him 20 cents per gun.
He said that he wouldn’t buy any shooting things. But he bought our so I think that it is probably going to be a good product

Three Possible Improvements

Maybe we could have a notch or something to put on there so it holds in place when we put the rubber band on.
We could maybe glue the PVC pipe together so it doesn’t fall off.
We could maybe have some other duct tape and so there is more options than just pink and blue. We can have boy prints and girl prints.

If I had to do it again what would I do to prepare better?

I would try everything that I was going to say and I would say what worked and what didn’t work. So I would have a perfect presentation and poster and I would know what it costed exactly. And I wouldn’t have to explain that much.

What advice would I give to a 4th grade student next year?

Get everything you need find the prices and figure out how much money we are going to make and find out how many of your product you are going to make. And find the cheapest materials as you can.