Descriptive Paragraph

Our assignment was to describe a particular place by painting a word picture in our reader’s mind. How did I do?

 

Morning Flight

     In the morning sunrise the wide eye falcon sat straight on a birch tree branch still and motionless. With razor sharp claws as long as a nail he griped the branch. The falcon had it’s eyes moving like a surveillance camera moving listening for any sound. It heard a gunshot in the distinct. With great powerful wings it flow into the air. Scanning for the hunter with bright yellow eyes. He didn’t find it. So he flow into the sunrise.

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