Picture book advice

Edward~ 
1. Limit=32 pages.
2. think like a preschooler, write like an adult 
 
Fox~
1. Grammar and spelling have to be correct 
2. Character comes first.
 
Monte~
1. No rules that can’t be broken
2. Write a story that inspires a reader. 
3. Be yourself.
4. Warm, humorous are key. 

The Spin

With the football

In my hands

Through the line

Around the defender

Before the green grass

In front of me

Behind the defender

Into a spin

Past the defense

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Into the green grass beyond

Adding six morepoints to the score.