January 21

CRITIQUE

I don’t like it.

 

 

Because it only red yellow and black.

And it is only a window.

Plus it has a lot of black.

And its a boring picture.

But there are some nice shapes.

And I don’t like all the poles.

But I like the style of the window.

The artist is talented.

I think the artist could do better.

 

In critique you can change opinions.

Because you have diferent to be critiqueing others.

Plus you don’t want to be mean.

And avribudy is right.

I like critique because you learn of your mistakes.

I woud like to be critiqued because you will get.

Because you can become better if you are critiqued.

And no body is trying to be mean.