Descriptive Paragraph
Our assignment was to paint a word picture in our reader’s mind and to describe a specific thing. How did I do on the assignment?
Walking towards the great fear I had made my hands sweaty. I gripped my dad’s hand even tighter. My dad told me I would be fine. I didn’t feel like it. We went into the long line and I felt the weird and horrible feeling in my stomach. Finally, it was our turn. I sat by my brother, Micah. I quickly buckled myself up and a woman made sure the buckle was tight. Then the man at the counter said it was time to go. The next thing I new, I was upside-down screaming with laughter! Wind blew into my face. Then, the ride was over. My legs felt like jelly. I wanted to go on it over and over again, but neither Dad or Micah wanted to go again. They wanted to go on an even greater fear I had, Thunder Hawk…