our assignment was to describe a place or thing. how did i do???

Going to the Iowa State fair is an extravagant sight. There are plenty of rides but, the food is the best part, no buts about it. The best food in my opinion, would be the fried butter. I had always wanted try fried butter but when I first got it I couldn’t smell it over the fair at first but, if I had seen it just in a picture I would have thought it was a corn dog but, the smell was sooo good I could have stood there forever but the crowd woke me from my trance. so Then imagine the best cinnamon roll you have ever tasted liquidized in a crunchy shell that is smooth like a corn dog but still crunchy with melted butter and frosting on top. I took one bite and the butter flowed into my mouth. soon it was gone and so was I.