Our assignment was to write a paragraph that would draw a picture in our readers’ mind.

How did I do?

As a little girl walk into the wonderful carnival, she couldn’t contain herself. She was overwhelmed with the sweet smell of cotton candy and the buttery popcorn. As she stuck her wet tongue out into the air hoping she could taste it, she looked at all of the rides there were big ones, small ones, red ones, green ones. She turned her head from side to side trying to absorb it all. Then, tugging on her mom’s hand, she walked towards a ride.