September 18

Personal Narrative Thoughts

Today I learned the difference between a watermelon story and a seed story. A seed story is on one part of a watermelon story for example, I went to a tigers game and when I walk in it was huge. A watermelon story is when you do a story about a long time spanned for example, We got in the car to go to a tigers game and we stop to get gas and then we went back on the road to detroit. See a seed story isn’t about the whole time from when you leave to go somewhere and come back its about one specific story. Writing from the inside of a story is about telling with meaning for example, I was going to detroit and I was so glad that we were going to a tigers game. Writing from outside of the story is like your looking down on it. For example, I was so happy that we were going to a tigers game and so  was my family and I was so happy my brother had to hit so I would calm down.

September 10

Shout Silently

This year the theme of Zeeland Christian is Shout Silently and I think that the theme is cool because Gods creation is awesome. For example two weeks ago there was this really cool sun set and I think God put that there for the theme. The next day in class Mr. Hutt saw the same sun set.God told me and Mr. Hutt that we sould tell the class about the awesome sun set.