Today I learned the difference between a watermelon story and a seed story. A seed story is on one part of a watermelon story for example, I went to a tigers game and when I walk in it was huge. A watermelon story is when you do a story about a long time spanned for example, We got in the car to go to a tigers game and we stop to get gas and then we went back on the road to detroit. See a seed story isn’t about the whole time from when you leave to go somewhere and come back its about one specific story. Writing from the inside of a story is about telling with meaning for example, I was going to detroit and I was so glad that we were going to a tigers game. Writing from outside of the story is like your looking down on it. For example, I was so happy that we were going to a tigers game and so  was my family and I was so happy my brother had to hit so I would calm down.