Blake And The Amusement Park [first draft]

Blake and his friends are at the amusement park .

His friends were making a bet with him………

“Hey Blake!”  “ Yes?”  “ I  bet you can’t do that ride! “  He looked up were his friend was pointing and stared in awe  “ Wow..”  “ ahhhhhhhhhhhh! ” the riders screamed in an high pitched voice.”Well can you do it or not!” “ummmmmmm I don’t know about this…..” “I think he’s scared” “yup me too” His friends had a secret conversation not including Blake “Um guys I think I’m gonna do it” “Really!?” they looked up in surprise from their    conversation. “Yes I’ll try it” “Ok” his friends said half laughing so Blake got in line and said to “himself I can do this”

His friends were watching him slowly move up the line.  He took a quick glance at friends and

saw they were laughing at him and he just got more motivated from that then he noticed he was at the front of the line “Oh”  He got on the ride get buckled in and said once more I  can do this

The ride started and he was already struck with fear “ahhhhhhhhhh!” the twists and turns made him queazy. He thought his face green as grass and  he looked ahead and saw and huge slope coming “Oh great this will be fun.” he said sarcastically then he felt a burst of speed and he screamed “ahhhhhhhh!” and thought well roller coasters are  for me! then he looked to see his friends laughing but they were upside down man he must be really sick. Then he looked ahead saw he was upside down “whoa!” then he saw the end of the ride “yes!” then the ride came darting to the end and screeched and the end of the coaster

He got of the ride and he saw two youngsters snickering at him and gave them the evil eye and they stoped and then he saw his friends they were almost hugging the floor from laughter and Blake said with courage “You can’t blame me for trying!” “so where’s the money you bet me?” and he smiled and his friends shot one back “oh come on at least let me choose the next ride!” “ok” his friends groaned “ok I choose lazer tag!”

 

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