Pitch Essay

Pitch Essay

by

Peter VP

 

We believe investing in our product is a wise decision. Our product is good quality. We will have incentives.

and most important we are donating money for RCs education so he can go to a Christian school I believe investing in our company is a good idea we are selling blow shooters for $2.00

Our product is good quality you can not break it. You can not even bend it over your knee because we are using schedule 40 pvc pipe it is very thick.

 

We have a good product. It shoots about 396 inches. You can also do a lot with the blow shooter. You can shoot it at a target. You can also with a friend you can see who can shoot it the farthest, and you can even have a mini battle with them and just have fun with them

 

The most important reason is we are sponsoring RC he is a 3rd grader in the Philippines. He is 9 years old and he needs money to pay for his education and so he can go to a Christian school so we can help him pay for it

Reflect on Market Day Pitch

When I waked into the room I gave a firm handshake and I looked them in the eye and said my name strong. Then I felt confident that we would get a deal and I was not that nervous anymore before I was very nervous but now I wasn’t near as nervous. When we did the keynote I read a little trembly and when I did the skit but I did better than I though. What I thought went  well was I did good remembering my lines for the skit but when I blowed the blow shooter it did not go far because I did not practice shooting it. the advice I would give to you when you are in 4th grade don’t be nervous because there was nothing to be nervous about

 

Every Boy Should go to Cadets

Every Boy Should go to Cadets

 

by

Peter  vanderploeg

 

Every boy should go to Cadets. At Cadets boys can do so many fun activities. Every boy should go to Cadets because you can make good Christian friends. In Cadets you can learn interesting stuff. I am a Cadet, and I think it is a great thing to be a part of Cadets.

 

A person can make good friends in Cadets. You will find good Christian friends when I first joined Cadets. One of the kids I didn’t even know before I went to Cadets but now he is my friend. That’s not all, you become friends with your Cadet counselor too.

 

At Cadets you can do many fun activities. You can earn badges. You can earn so many different badges that you can earn. I have the badge axemanship and a whole lot of other badges. You can race a pinewood derby  car. You can go on Cadet campouts. Campouts are very fun, and I think you would like them.

 

You can learn so many things in Cadets. I learned how to split wood because it was my first year of Cadets. I will learn more stuff. You also learn to be kind and trust in God because you study the Bible.  I am learning so much stuff in Cadets, and you can too. Cadets is so much fun.

 

I hope I have persuaded you to join Cadets. you can do fun activities. You can make good Christian friends. You can learn so much in Cadets. I hope you enjoyed it.