Descriptive Paragraph

Our assignment was to describe a person, place, or thing. How did I do?

 

                 Magic Kingdom in Disney World is an amazing place. As we first hurried in we could see a TON of different people and a ton of different rides. As we walked to the different rides we could hear people’s loud screaming and talking.With our detailed maps in our hands, we chose to go to Space Mountain first. When we walked out of Space Mountain we felt a little dizzy because of all the twists and turns. I think Space Mountain was the BEST ride in Disney World. For lunch we had sandwiches, coke, grapes, and carrots. When we walked back into the park from eating our delicious lunches we were hit with a tidal wave of different smells like buttery popcorn and tasty candy. As we walked around I could taste sweet, chocolatey M&Ms. As we walked out of the park at 10:00 PM feeling tired, I new that I had one of the best times of my life!