The difference between a watermelon story and a seed story is, a watermelon story is usually a very long story, but the good thing bout a watermelon is that it has more information about your story. A seed story is just a little piece of your watermelon story, it could also be know as a slice of watermelon.

Example of watermelon story:
Today I woke up the I got out of bed and then went down stairs to eat breakfast then I packed up my stuff and headed to school. When I got to school I said hi to my teacher then I put my backpack down then I went outside.

As you can see that was a long story not very detailed cause if I took my time to make this story long and detailed it would talk a very long time and would take a lot of room.

Example of a seed story:
Today I woke up to the sound of birds chirping and the sun shinning into my room from the window.

As you can see about that story is it’s a little more detailed and a lot shorter. The whole difference about a seed story and a watermelon story is just that one (the seed story) is to get you started on your writing getting ready for the watermelon story.

The difference between writing from inside the story from the outside of the story is, writing from the inside the story the reader can feel more of what you know and what you feel, but writing from the outside of the story is less emotion less knowledge for the reader.

Example of inside the story:               I took a deep breath then jumped on my skate board and headed faster than a car it felt going down the hill, all the sudden I felt a rock it the wheel and I don’t remember anything else. I blinked a couple of times when I saw a dark figure leaning over me, after a minute or two I realized it was my brother.

You can tell that I didn’t say like I fell of my skate board a my brother ran down after me to see if I was ok but my eyes were closed, he ran to get my mom. You can’t write that because how did would you know that if it really was you, you wouldn’t know that your brother to get your mom if you were innocuous.

And that is the difference between writing from the inside of the story and the outside of the story, and the watermelon and seed story.

The book I am reading is The Mystery at Lilac Inn, it’s a Nancy Drew book. I’m only on page 74, but that’s enough to know that this is a really good book.

The Mystery at Lilac Inn, is so far about Nancy going to the Lilac Inn for a friends reopening of the Lilac Inn and here wedding. Everything is going perfect until Nancy’s friend Emily invites her to Lilac Inn with her other friend Helen. Nancy and Helen are on there way to The Lilac Inn in a canoe. They’re going down the river nice and easy until all of a sudden there canoe gets capsized. They have to swim to shore. They meet Emily and a new friend John Micbride, they take them to the Lilac Inn where they also meet Hazel, Maud Potter, Mrs.Willoughby, and Mr.Daly. They come close to death and close to crying. For instance, a spear right past your face underwater, jewelry thief, expensive missing tools, stolen charge plate, even cloning. There is also much,much more, interesting instantness going around Lilac Inn.

I hope you read The Mystery at Lilac Inn, and even other Nancy drew books.

#1 The Secret in the Old Clock
#2 The Hidden StairCase
#3 The Bungalow Mystery
#4 The Mystery at Lilac Inn First Six To Get You Started!!!!!!!
#5 The Secret of Shadow Ranch
#6 The secret of Red Gate Farm

Shout Silently Actions that Speak is our theme for this year, it talks about how that you don’t need to use your words to share the word of God you can also use your actions. For example: if you help a neighbor get their mail or walk there dog. It shows that you are a real christian and that you believe, I’m not saying that you can’t say “hi” or “have a nice day”, but actions are better than words.
The verse comes from Psalm 19:3-4

They have no speech, they use no words; no sound is heard from them.
Yet their voice goes out to all earth, their words to ends of the world. In the heavens God has pitched a tent for the sun.