My advice
Edward–
1- Write what you know
2- Take drafts one step at a time
3- Don’t force sentences to rhyme
Fox–
1- Do be original
2- Do not write to teach
3- Do keep text under 500 words
Montes–
1- No rigid rules
2- Writing a picture book is 10% science and 90% art
3- Kids with short attention spans need to like the beginning
4- Need to fall in love with the main character