February 19

My Mystery Story

“What happened here?” The detective asked, looking at the cold corpse none other than Winni. It had been a few days after the crime had happened.

“I don’t know sir,” the poor man known as Wensin replied. “I was just doing my night shift here at the museum when I saw something strange. I flashed my light on it and I just saw him laying there. I thought he was one of the mannequins that had somehow fallen out of its exhibit at first, but when I looked closer, I realized it was a man. A dead one too.” The detective took out a pencil and jotted everything down.

“Do you know anything else?” he asked.

“Well,” Wensin continued, “I thought I saw a ring on his finger, kind of like a wedding ring but with a lot more diamond-looking jewelry… but I don’t think he has it on now. Maybe it slipped off his finger?”

“Perhaps, or perhaps he culprit killed him and came for the ring later. Perhaps someone realized he was dead and took the ring while no one was looking.” The detective soliloquized, “How much money do you have?”

“On me? None.” The night guard replied.

“No, no. I mean in general.” The detective said, his pencil moving two times faster than his lips.

“Just enough to put food on my table, have a halfway decent apartment and clothes that aren’t ripped to pieces.” Wensin replied. The detective, finding that he squeezed all the information possible from the man, left to interview the next person. As he was walking away from Wensin, he heard Wensin mumble, “I hate my job…”

He approached the tour guide known as Fishi. After explaining what happened, he began asking questions.

“Where were you the evening of the murder?” He asked.

“I was here at the museum. I was showing a group of elementary students from Blooming Meadows Elementary School around the museum. Then I showed a group of adults from Massachusetts around. Then after closing, I went home and had supper with my wife.”

“Did anything seem suspicious to you?” the detective asked.

“Well, I saw Enni at his shift and he waved goodbye before he left. but I could have sworn I saw him an hour later…” He replied.

“What was he doing?” the detective asked.

“Well, he was kinda looking around. Before I passed, he put his hood over his head and looked the other way…” He replied.

“Does your wife like jewelry?” the detective asked, looking up from the pad of paper for an instant then looking back down at it as he continued writing.

“Depends on what kind, she doesn’t like rings that much because she complains that it hurt her fingers. She barely can stand wearing her wedding ring. She doesn’t have her ears pierced but she does like to wear bracelets and necklaces every once in awhile.” the tour guide said.

“How much money do you have?” the detective asked.

“Well, I always considered myself decently wealthy. Not like I have a mansion or anything though. However, I’m expecting to be a father soon so I’m trying to find a second job to earn a little more cash for our baby girl.” He said. The detective congratulated him for his future daughter then asked the final question,

“Do you know anything about the murder?”

“The only things I know was from the news and from you.” The tour guide replied. With that, the detective left to find Sharpi, the security lady. After being informed about the case he began to ask her questions.

“Where were you the evening of the murder?” he asked.

“I was in the security room making sure no one was stealing the museum’s property.” she replied.

“Did you see anything usual or strange?” He asked.

“Well I saw two guys go into the bathroom before closing, but they should have been able to get out before closing. There was also some guy who hid behind things and scared people. However, he was evacuated off the premises. So no, not really.” She replied.

“Do you like jewelry?” He asked.

“As long as it’s pretty I do.” She said, holding up her hand revealing a golden band covered in sparkles, “But this is all I have.”

“How much money do you have?” he asked her, only glancing at her ring before noting her answer.

“Decently rich.” she replied. With that, the detective was done with his interviewing. He knew who had done it.

When the museum was closing, Fishi pulled Winni into the bathroom for some privacy knowing that the ring was of high value. He suffocated Winni and pulled him into a hallway so the guards would find him and to hide the evidence. Before he could grab the ring, he heard Wensin coming and fled. When Wensin left the corpse to lead the police to the crime scene, he quickly grabbed the ring and left the museum. The police found the ring a week later at a local pawn shop. He did it because the cost of having a child scared him and he could tell that the ring had at least three times the worth of the average wedding ring.

Sharpi loves jewelry. She has enough money to buy whatever ring she wants, but she is very picky about her jewelry, especially rings seeing she only has one. If she didn’t have such picky tastes she would have had more than that. She couldn’t have done the crime because she had been in the control room the whole day as well.

Wensin is somewhat poor, but he is content of what he has. He doesn’t really like his job when it all of a sudden takes time away from time he could be at home or making money. He wouldn’t have been that upset if he had done the crime, because he would have known that he probably would have to take time to do the interview and everything.

November 2

Thematic Essay

In the book, Nobody’s There, a big theme I saw was there is always a way to get along with someone. The author is Joan Lowery Nixon. When Abbie’s father leaves their family, she makes a bad choice of throwing a rock through his new girlfriend’s window which send her to court. The judge commends her to one year of being a program named Friend to Friend, where kids help and get to know an elderly person. Abbie gets assigned to the biggest grouch on the planet. (warning: spoilers ahead)

In the book, Nobody’s There, a big theme I saw was there is always a way to get along with someone. An example would be Abbie’s little brother Davy and his mother. Davy obviously loved his dad, but then he left for no reason he knew. Confused, he got mad quite easily. Abbie knew their mother was hurting, and it wasn’t helping anyone that Davy blamed her. After Abbie told Davy about the dangerous, action-packed adventures with Mrs. Merkel, he started to be nicer and back to himself. This resulted in him enjoying his family and his family enjoying him.

In the book, Nobody’s There, a big theme I saw was there is always a way to get along with someone. Mrs. Merkel  Is very annoying old lady. Whenever Abbie would go to her house she would give her a very hard time. she would call herself a private eye and spy on people who she thinks are criminals. She doesn’t get along with many people especially Abbie and her book club members. She hated cops because she claims they take all of the credit. Near the end of the book, she gets really hurt. When Abbie told Mrs. Merkel that she only found the culprit because of Mrs. Merkel’s notes, she was very happy. And even though she could no longer be a private eye, she was interested in the mystery books Abbie started bringing her. And, since Abbie knew she was going to say she could write better than any of those books, the last book Abbie planed to read to her was about how to write mystery stories.

In the book, Nobody’s There, a big theme I saw was there is always a way to get along with someone. Another example would be Jamie Lane and her boyfriend’s kids. When Abbie accidentally met Jamie at a coffee shop, her work place, Abbie was with Mrs. Merkel. And Mrs. Merkel being her usual, rude and opinionated self, she made Abbie tell Jamie to not come back to their table after they got their drinks. Maybe Abbie was a little reviled by that though… But she still couldn’t keep her eyes off of Jamie. After all that, Abbie’s father came into her house and strictly told her to never go near that coffee shop again(which if he left he should stay out… Her mother can punish her if needed). So her father invited his kids, and by that I mean forced, to go out to eat with him and his girlfriend. Then Davy made up a plan to ignore Jamie as much as possible and only speak to her when absolutely necessary. Maybe it wasn’t the best way to get along, but they weren’t fighting.

So as you can see, The book, Nobody’s there, is very relatable in life with an adventurous twist. There’s annoying people, siblings that can drive you crazy(but regardless you still love them) and even people that may have ruined a part in your life. But, In the book, Nobody’s There, a big theme I saw was there is always a way to get along with someone.

September 18

Descriptive wrinting

The bird card makes me remember when Dad was testing out his drone and we thought a bird tried to eat it. It was a few days after his birthday and he was flying it outside. The itchy, wet grass against my bare feet that weren’t moving and the hot sun beat down on me, my brother and my Dad as we watched it fly in the air. Suddenly, we saw a giant bird soaring high in the sky. We hopped that the bird wouldn’t grab it, fly off and eat it, but the thought of it made me laugh. Who would want to eat metal, plastic or whatever the drone was made of? After 5 minutes, the bird disappeared like a good mood when someone insults a hot-headed person and my dad took his drone inside.

 

The computer card reminds me of when I went on a(legal) “music trip” on the laptop. I clicked the first video as a starter. The perfect tune that filled my room was like sitting on a dance floor, you could never drown out the music as it takes full control of your mind and your focus. The song, Electric Magic, was a song about when you find a new song that you instantly love. When it was done, I clicked another song which had a different beat. The only sound in my room was the ‘Waoh-oooh! Woahhhhh-ooohhh,’ from Snowman. Every time, I know that this is just the beginning to doing nothing but listening to music like a secret language no one can understand but me, the song just blasting in my room.


The firework card reminds me of when my dad blew up some fireworks. The cold summer night air made me shiver as I got ready for the fireworks. The first one went off, which was lit by my dad, and exploded into a big, colorful bomb in the sky. My brother Phoenix lit another one and then my brother Triston, both with the same effect. Then it was my turn. I took the lighter and carefully lead the flame to the line like a chef when they cut food. As the line caught on fire, I ran like a deer when it hears a gunshot. Next, it was the “grand finale.” Triston and Dad walked a long ways away and, after they realized I still had the lighter and had go back and get it, they lit it. All I could hear was “Pew, pew, pew!” That was awesome.

September 18

Theme Writing

Therefore everyone who hears these words of mine and puts them into practice is like a wise man who built his house on the rock. The rain came down, streams rose, and the wind blew and beat against the house but it did not fall because it had it’s foundation on the rock.

 

At the end of our 7th grade year, me and my class went to camp to choose a theme for this year. Our theme this year, “Built on the Rock”, means a lot to me as both an 8th grader at ZCS and as a Christian in the world.

 

The theme verse will help me in school. This verse tells me that I should learn the bible verses joyfully. When I’m going down the hall I shouldn’t throw my trash on the ground. I shouldn’t listen to dirty music or complain about the homework. I should respect my classmates by not talking in class. I should complete my homework with my best effort. I shouldn’t chew gum in class. All to respect my schoolmates and the workers at school. When I’m in family groups, I should encourage the other kids.

 

I can use this verse in the world. I believe this means to not judge someone by the way they look. When life gives me a spanking, don’t blame people who aren’t involved. Pray for people in war, famine or drought. To not hold a grudge against people. To listen to people when they are having a tough time.  When someone is sad, to offer my best laugh, hug or sillyness(my best talent). Maybe even open a heart to heart talk. I should remember the “Rock.” When I’m scared, He can pick me up. When I’m happy I should praise Him for all He’s done in my own way.

 

Our theme this year, “Built on the Rock”, means a lot to me as both an 8th grader at ZCS and as a Christian in the world. I seriously love this year’s theme, and it teaches me so much. Thank you.