Boston Rivalry
The Boston Massacre of 1770 was all just a big misunderstanding, they both started it. Because there were things that they both did that was wrong. For example, one the British soldier hit the young boy with the butt of the gun which was not right. Second the Americans hit the British and were drunk. But before we get to the arguments put yourself in either the Americans shoes or the British shoes. First for the British soldier imagine a bunch of people hitting you and just making you feel horrible and having just a lot of people yelling fire, fire if you dare and throwing a bunch of rocks and snowballs at you . Now for the americans imagine just asking them to not tax all of your stuff and they shot 5 people I mean are you kidding me and they hit a 17 year old boy he is not even an adult yet mean come on british. And also the british taxed all of are stuff so we obviously are going to ask you to not do that but that does not give them permission to shot the americans we just y mean you taxed tea we need that for our daily lives people.
I believe that the americans started the boston massacre. Because the americans or the 17 year old boy would not have come up to the soldier none of the fight would have happened. We never would have had to fire we never would have needed more soldiers and y get that we hit you with the bud of the gun but the soldier has the right if somebody Is hurting him then he has the right to defend himself he didn’t try to hurt the boy . Well if the soldier wouldn’t have hit the boy with the bud of the gun the crowd of people never would have had to come so if the soldier would have been respectful of the boy he wouldn’t have hit the soldier he was just trying to protect himself because the bud of a gun can hurt sometimes. Just because we were doing those things it does not give you the right to shoot one of our people or 5 of them that’s not ok.
Well first of all we never would have come up to the soldier If the british wouldn’t have taxed all of are stuff or the colonist or the americans including things that we use in our daily lives we are different then you guys we don’t want to have everything taxed It Is too much money to spend in our lifetime. Well the british did help the americans In a big war and a war Is pretty expensive and we got you more land so we need some more money we don’t have a lot since we helped you guys in a war that was not ares we were trying to be nice because we wanted to be fellow colonies(or whatever they are called) .
Well then if you needed more money why didn’t you tax the british people. And also why did you help us in the war did we ask for your help.Well we were just being nice ok can’t we be nice and second why would we tax our own colonist we would just be losing are colonies money.
The british and the americans were going back and forth
So If you Believe what the americans think circle americans but If you believe what the british think then circle the british.
AMERICANS vs BRITISH
good job!!!
I really like it!, You have persuaded me into not having a side. you may want to look were you could add commas, but the rest is great.
good job teags
I really like all the details. Maybe next time stick with the same side all the time, saying it is a big misunderstanding at the beginning and it was the colonist who started the Boston Massacre at the end. I really like your five paragraph essay. Good job!
Thanks ya I just do really know whose side to do