Our assignment was to paint a word picture in our readers’ mind of a specific place or thing. How did I do?
At Niagra Falls it was a sweet scene to look at. In the foggy, awesomely cool dark night. Colors were flashing back and fourth blue, green, yellow, pink, white. Every color you can think of was flashing back and fourth like a disco ball flashes back and fourth, across the Niagra. Millions and millions of gallons of water going down the falls ever second crashing on rocks so loud like gun shots kept on going off. Rain bowed mist sprinkling up like a ballon floats up it was just an amazing scene to look at. You can smell that nice wonderful buttery popcorn you can taste it and you don’t even have any of it, it smelled so good. You can also smell fresh water mist it smelled like a morning after it rained last night. Whoosh. Bang. Whoosh. Bang. Standing right next to where the water just starts to go down the falls is kind of scary because it has so much pressure it will just bring you right on in SCARY. People keep on saying popcorn, popcorn, popcorn, anyone popcorn its really good. It really gets annoying when all you here is popcorn anyone all day and Bang. Bang. Bang. When it was time to go I wasn’t all that mad because Bang. Bang. Bang. gets a little annoying but I would miss it because it was so cool, one of the coolest things I ever saw, and when we left we could see the mist for about 50 miles after we left AWESOME place to go.
