Metaphor Writing

Collin Dykgraaf

Mrs. Roskamp

LA, 8A

14 November 2016

I Am A WaterFall

I am a water fall. A waterfall consists of many adventures. The first way I am like a waterfall is that there are many mysteries and achievements that are still to be found and achieved . In a waterfall there can sometimes be caves hidden in the depths of the waterfall. In the caves that hide behind the waterfall are filled with achievements that you never knew would be there. My life is full of hidden mysteries. My life is also full of achievements that i still need to get too and go through. Some of the achievements have been people that have come into my life and also helped me. The people in my life are still figuring out some of my mysteries. They go through achievements with me and don’t give up on me. The water at the top of the waterfall is like all my emotions that build up and then released into better things once i get them out

I am also like a waterfall because of the moss that grows at the bottom on the rocks. I am like the rocks at the bottom because the water that comes down is like all of the pain that you go through and once you have gone through all the pain you steady out and once you steady out life becomes beautiful. The end result is the best part because of how much you see and what you have learned. When all of that comes together you see the true beauty of life. The water beating down on the rocks are like sin because the water hurts so much from the pressure. The moss that grows on you are like the scares from all the sin that has happened to you or that you did.

I am alos like a waterfall because God created me and he also created waterfalls. He made waterfall to give people peace and calmness when they look at them and I feel like God put me on this earth to bring people peace. I like to keep things calm and peaceful. My christianity and amazing love for God has shaped me to be the person I am today and that I hope to become.   

And finally, the last reason I am like a waterfall is because of the beautiful pond at the bottom of the waterfall. The pond at the bottom is like my faith because when you get to the bottom of the waterfall it is all beautiful. The pond surrounded by the amazing forest is the end result once you have gone through all of the bad times. The the streams that go off from the pond are the new paths the hurt has opened up.

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