Trial thesis statement

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Posted by cvandenbosch22 | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on February 24, 2014

Every kid should play play sports

Comments (8)

Hey Cade

This is a good Thesis Statement

Isaiah

I’m excited to see why you think all kids should play sports.

Great Thesis Statement Cade! Maybe you should do a specific sport?

evry kid should play sports

Nice thesis cade

Cade,

You’ve picked something you’re very passionate about, so I think you’ll do a great job of convincing your readers that every kid should play sports. Landon brings up a good point about considering a specific sport…

It will be very important that you come up with some good reasons for why all kids should play sports.

Keep it up!

Mr. Commeret

Good thesis Cade. Do you think there is one sport that is better than others? Or do you like all sports?

I decided to do basketball

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