Descriptive paragraph
Our assignment was to tell and describe about a person, place, or thing, and paint a a picture in their mind. How did I do?
The wolf walked easily through the forest weaving between the trees. The cold night had left a slight frost. Her steps were soft and quiet, masked by the pine needles underfoot. The early morning sun felt warm on her back, which shone silver. She trotted up a steep hill observing her surroundings. The smell of pine hung heavy in the air but there was a significant difference to it, she pricked her ears and briskly trotted down the hill, sensing danger she started into a a jog. After a while she stopped to look about. There was a slight wind now rustling her fur. There was a hiss, a thud, and the tree above her shook, an arrow stuck in the sapling. She bolted off with her ears low against her skull, kicking up pine needles as she ran.
That’s ssssooooooooo descriptive!!!!!!!!
Why thank you, by the way how do you comment on peoples posts?