Critique
I like it. But you need to have more yellow or just more colors. You need it to have more movement in it. Make it a lot bigger. It’s to dark. Don’t just make strait lines make other types of lines. Fill in all the spots. Make it pop out. Don’t have the same color right next to each other. Have more shapes in it. You should combined some colors so you can have some cool colors. Make it lighter so people can see it easy.It makes me feel sad. Make it feel happy. I like how there are stripes. And that is the only thing that makes me feel happy. Make it so there is white instead of black cause then it feels like daytime instead of nighttime.
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