Our assignment was to piant a word picture in our readers’ minds of a person, place, or thing. How did I do?
Sand on the beach towels, water on your feet, the sound of laughter when the waves knock over little children. You can just smell the grains of sand. My favorite time to go to the beach is when it is warm out so the water feels good. I love to go to the beach right when the sun is setting it looks so pretty! I always eat lunch there with my family, I like to pack a bunch of foods like lettuce and tomato and then put it all on white bread at the beach. I go to the beach in the winter and walk on the really thick ice. It is so cool. We like to go in the fall too and walk by the pier. We go to the beach year around cause I love it so much.
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that is really good
i like how u said u always ate with your family there, and how u said when u said how u like going there on warm days! and how u said u packed food when u go there! good job
I liked how you said We go to the beach year round because you love it so much!