metaphor writing.

Theo Ryden

Mrs rozskamp

8B

November 2016

Metaphor writing

I am a Volcano.  A Volcano is a constructive force, but it can also be a destructive force.  I am a constructive person, but I can be destructive, too. A example of being constructive is when I build up my hamstrings or my walking or my relationships. I build up my legs in the gym AndI build up my walking on the treadmill. And I build up my relationships  in school.

An example of a destructive force is when I get mad at my sisters.nearby, a dormant volcano loomed over the village. My sisters are the village.

           I am like a volcano because their are times where I am dormant.

When volcanoes are “dormant” They are Un-active. When I am dormant, I need a break from everyone and everything around Me. as I am adding on too my sentence in the first paragraph, the village is about to be annihilated with everyone in it( and that is not good.)

I am like a volcano when I Explode my top. I am A physical guy, I can’t help it.I explode at everybody around me. A volcano “Blows its Top”  when the force of the eruption Is too much. That Happens to me when I Get mad At Lily or ruth.

I am also like a volcano when I endanger the lives of others around me. When I blow my top this happens. I hurt my sisters, fight with my parents, or put to risk my relationships.I want to STOP letting my actions take over my life and friends. One way I can stop doing this is by praying.

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