Thesis: Every kid should play organized sports. (Like Zeeland Little League.)
2 thoughts on “Trial Thesis Statement”
Elaina,
This seems to be a popular thesis statement…and with good reason! It is definitely a topic that you are passionate about.
You may want to make it a little more specific. For example, are you referring to playing sports at recess? OR playing “organized” sports (on a team)? Or both? Some clarification would be good.
Elaina,
This seems to be a popular thesis statement…and with good reason! It is definitely a topic that you are passionate about.
You may want to make it a little more specific. For example, are you referring to playing sports at recess? OR playing “organized” sports (on a team)? Or both? Some clarification would be good.
You’re off to a great start.
Mr. Commeret
I’m thinking organized sports, so I’ll change that!