My Mystery Story

Hunter Diepenhorst

Mrs. Roskamp

LA, 8A

17 February 2017

One Friday night in the summertime Linda was throwing a party. This wasn’t an ordinary party though everyone was there from here highschool and some other friends. They had a DJ named Juan who was the best DJ in the country. They lived in Honolulu, HI in the richest parts of the city kind of like Hidden Hills in California. They had very high security it was almost impossible to get into the party without an invitation. The invitation had to have your name on it a picture and your birth date. Diesel and Vin are two of the many body guards but Linda had more. Her parents were going in Turkos and Chakos. Some of the kids were old enough to drink and others weren’t but none were allowed to do drugs. Someone in the party was dealing drugs to a bunch of the kids.

I was personally there I am Linda’s boyfriend my name is Hunter. We were just having a good time, people were dancing and talking. Everything was going great until we heard sirens and also the bodyguards said to leave right away. There was a huge crowd of people who were running out of the house. People were falling and getting trampled. So my friends and I went to my house and Linda left with some friends.

The next day me and Linda went back to the house to help with the case. They had surveillance cameras all over they had 4 main suspects. They were Willem, Cameron, Lewis, and Luke they looked like they were doing something wrong. Willem was hiding things in his pockets and had his hood on attempting to cover his face. Cameron had a lot of cash on him and had a backpack on his back. Lewis was walking around hiding things in cabinets and other spots and also had a little cash on him. Luke was just walking around but he weird smell on him he smelled like drugs. There were a few witnesses Gabe, Lucas, and Matt. Gabe saw Cameron and Lewis both exchanging things with other kids. Lucas saw Willem drop a few baggies of something and also saw a lot of money in his pocket. Matt saw Luke who was running through the crowd trying to find Willem to tell him something the only word he could hear was they are coming. Within minutes after that the police had showed up and the body guards we looking everywhere. A little background about Willem he is a senior at Mililani High School and is the captain on the football team. Cameron is a party kid he goes to every party and is very popular. Luke is the starting point guard on the Varsity basketball team. They have been involved in something with drugs.

That is why I hired detective his name is Watson. He is one of the best around. So we started our search the day after the party. We found a baggie with a little bit of marijuana on the ground with two sets of fingerprints which was getting sent into the police station. We walked around for a while went through the house and then we found some blood on the floor. We followed blood drips all the way to a dumpster in the garage. There we found Luke and Willem in the dumpster dead. There was sign of any wounds so we sent it into the police station to find out how they died. Which would take about 5 days. It also could be possible that they find the culprit before. So they kept looking and finally they found a key and put it a program to find out what it leads to and they found out it was a safe. So they started to track where it was bought and by who. Unfortunately it was bought with cash naturally and they started to interview the casher. It lead to a guy named Weston we checked his criminal records and he was clear so they went to visit him and he wasn’t home. Then we went through the house only to find the exact safe. There plan was in it they were tricking them. They had the pictures of everything they were going to do and where and when. Watson started to take pictures and on his fourteenth picture. He found a body and two bags he thought the killed them and he looked closer and they hired a person who puts away bodies from the police department.

 

The Conclusion

They were two fake bodies and they just set that up to lead us of track. Then they found a picture of some island somewhere to only found out it was one of the biggest island in the world. They were in greenland with one of the biggest criminals their. Within about 2 days the planned a trip there to go find them they were in Greenland. They did figure out it was Luke and Willem they interviewed their parents. They said that they haven’t been home since the night of the party and they took all of the money in their houses. That’s how we knew they we in Greenland we were off. In about 12 hours we were there and tracking only to find out they were both died already. They went over all there clues and found out this. They were four people in on the crime Willem, Luke, and the lady at the police office we puts away the bodies.

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