The Comeback

The Comeback

Introduction

Charlie is a kid who isn’t that nice to other people. Quincy, his brother is about 2 years younger than Charlie, and very nice. They both love the park that is right across the street. Mom, Charlie, and Quincy all live in the same house. Mom is always nice! Charlie and Quincy cannot just come together and get together!

  Will They Start To Be Nice To Each other Or Not?

Scene 1

One day Charlie comes stomping into the house. Mom exclaims, “Let’s have Harley over”  Charlie responds, “ I’m fine with that!” They want to go play in the sandbox with the toy cars. Later Mom hollers, “Time to come in boys”  They go inside to eat without even picking up their toy cars! After dinner Mom goes to mow the lawn. While Mom is riding she doesn’t see the toys!  SHE RODE OVER THEM!!!!!!

Mom hears a loud noise, she crushed the toys!!

      Mom comes inside and says, “I broke your toys on “accident”  Charlie starts complaining “But maaam” Mom hollers “NO BUTS” “Harley has to go home immediately!” When Charlie and Quincy get back home from dropping Harley off Mom says “you guys left your toys outside you need to go to your room!”

          Scene 2

Later in the day the next morning at school the class is doing a math paper and Charlie goes over to Samuel’s desk and says, “Your are only suppose  to do problem 3,6,8, and 9.” When the class hands in their math paper, the teacher looks at Samuel’s paper and she says, “Why did you only do 3,6,8 and 9?” Samuel exclaims, “Because Charlie told me to!” Samuel gets mad at Charlie for telling him the wrong math problems to do just to get him in trouble. Charlie and Samuel start stomping back to their seats.

 

    When Charlie and Quincy get back home, they start fighting once more! Mom hollered “go to your room again” Their faces had tears like it was raining, as they went to their room. When they are in their room, they’re trashing it and having fun. Mom let’s them come out, they go outside to play catch. When they are playing catch Charlie throws the ball at the window and broke it! GUESS WHO HE BLAMED IT ON????

    HIS BROTHER QUINCY!!!

    Scene 3

One day at the neighbors house, Charlie and Quincy are walking back home across the street. Charlie dares Quincy to walk across when a car is coming. Quincy says “OF COURSE NOT!!” So then Charlie tries to push him but cannot. Charlie says “fine,” so then they just walk together across the street. At home together their mom says to do something creative together. “I know” whispers Quincy. “Mom could make a Scavenger Hunt!”

They ask mom, she replies “sure.” Quincy is really excited to do it, because they can finally do something together without having fighting being included, and it will cheer Charlie up!

   Climax

Mom decides to make the Scavenger Hunt at the playground. At the playground at 1:00 o’clock , they searched for the items on the list until 4:00 o’clock. While they were on the Monkey Bars trying to search for the items Charlie gets stuck! Quincy hollers “Charlie, Charlie where are you?!” Quincy starts looking for him. “I see you!” Quincy comes to help. When Quincy and Charlie are home from the playground they about fall down they got so scared! All Charlie’s friends start singing “Happy Birthday To You” Charlie and Quincy start to walk in and about slipped on the cake! Charlie exclaims,“Speaking of cake, can we start eating it !?” They start to shove it in each others faces, having a cake war!

Falling Action

At the house later in the evening, they are celebrating Charlie’s b-day, Charlie says, “I’m     not going to be mad anymore!” Charlie is as happy as a clown! “I like eating cake!” The party is over, everybody is gone, and Charlie and Quincy go outside to play together, “jump, jump, jump,” they say as their hands are in the air jumping. Charlie is so happy now that the party cheered him up! After playing for 30 minutes they go inside to eat dinner. They had potatoes, tomatoes, salad, chicken, and water, they had a big dinner. “This is my favorite meal ever!,” exclaims Charlie, as his eyebrows go up.

Later at night, mom’s standing by the bed with her hands on her hips, and she peacefully says “It’s time for you guys to go to bed.”

Ending

In the morning, while they’re eating breakfast, Charlie says, “I like to have you as a brother, Quincy” Quincy replies, “Same with me.” In the meantime while they’re getting a snack, they bring it outside, almost like a picnic. So they can play and eat their snack at the same time.       SCRUMPCIOUS!!!

    “I love picnics, we should do it like everyday!” Charlie and Quincy go inside to ask mom if they can walk over to the park. “Ok” says mom. “Let’s go, let’s go, hurry up!” So at the park Quincy says, “Can we go down the slide together?!” Charlie starts laughing, we can’t fit together!”

 “HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!”