Posted by nlubbers22 | Posted in Writing | Posted on October 31, 2013
HOW JOHNNY LEARNED TO KNEEBOARD!
Noah’s dad starts the boat at his cottage. Vroom! He’s idling out into the middle of the lake with Noah on the kneeboard. Then Noah shouts, “I’m ready!”
Suddenly Noah’s dad takes off going super fast.
Vrooooom! Noah gets up super fast (He’s very good) and the people on the boat say, “Good job Noah!”
Noah does the sign for faster. Johnny exclaimed,
“I wouldn’t ever do that.” That is crazy!”
Then Noah jumps the wake on the kneeboard and says,
“I really like kneeboarding. It’s awesome!”
“Well who’s next?”
said Johnny’s dad. No one answered.
“Okay, Johnny you’re doing it!”
“Me,why me?” “Because you can.”
“I don’t want to do it.”
“What if I get hurt?”
“Or what if I drown?”
“Don’t be a wimp!”
You will have a life jacket on.”
said Johnny’s dad.
“Fine!”
shouted Johnny. Noah showed Johnny how to kneeboard. It took awhile because he complained a lot more. He jumped off the boat and got the knee board which was close to the boat and idled until the rope was tight. Vroom, went the boat. Johnny was struggling to get up then…
SLASH!
“He’s off,” shouted Johnny’s dad! Johnny fell, but he wasn’t moving! Noah sprung into action and quickly got him and brought him on the boat. Noah’s dad raced back to the cottage.
Two days later he was okay. Johnny shouted,
“I have to do this. I think I can, I believe in myself.”
But Johnny’s dad said,
“You don’t have too.”
“I have too, I must.”
shouted Johnny! “Ok I guess you can!”
said Johnny’s dad. “Let’s go than.” yelled Johnny! So off they went.
They got on the boat. Vroom! He started the boat Johnny went! He got up! He did it! He… Fell? But he didn’t get hurt. So he tried again and… Vroom! He’s going good, He’s going! Wow! He made it. He faced his fears. When he got back there was a big celebration…
When he got home and went to school he told his classmates and they said, “Wow, that’s so cool! I couldn’t do that, congratulations!
Here’s a link to me reading my story ->Kneeboarding with Johnny
Here’s a link to my story that you can print and that has pictures->Realistic fiction story