LA Mystery

 

Just a typical Monday off, which was spent by Johanna Smith, a 17 year old girl at Tanger Outlets, one of her favorite places to shop, I mean, Starbucks, American Eagle, Nike, and so much more! Why wouldn’t she spend her day off there? I mean what could happen?

The only thing that was a little bit different was her jewelry that day. She wore her very special red ruby locket. It was a family heirloom and it meant a lot to her. It was given to her by her mom, who received it from her mom, etc. She decided she would wear the necklace because it was a beautiful day, and why not? I mean it matched her shoes perfectly!

3 of her friends accompanied her to the mall that day, Bindy, Val, and Noemi. They

all had great style, so if Jo was going to be buying clothes today, these girls were going to be there with her.

Her and her friends went into H and M, one of her favorite stores. She picked out a couple cute tops and skirts to try on in the fitting room. The necklace didn’t match the outfit she wanted to show her friends, so she left it on the shelf in the fitting room. The outfit took a long time to get on, but after Jo got the outfit on, she came out to show her friends. Bindy had quickly left to go to the bathroom, but almost right after Jo came out, she was right there ready to critique the outfit. Her friends had many things to say about the outfit, pretty much all the comments were telling her that she should purchase the the outfit. Her friends spent most of their time telling her that the price was great, and they thought it looked great on her! Jo finally agreed to buy the outfit, but when she came back into the fitting room, she realised something, something that provoked her to scream at the top her her lungs.“The necklace! It’s..It’s..Gone!!!”

“What do you mean?” worried Val

“I put my necklace in the fitting room,” Jo started to explain, “then after I showed you guys that outfit, I came back in here and the necklace was gone!”

“It was a crappy piece of jewelry anyways.” murmured Bindy.

“What was that?” Jo asked.

“Nothing” replied Bindy, she knew she probably shouldn’t had said that.

“Well what do I do now?” worried Jo.

“You could hire a detective, my ex-husband Detective Sam Parker is a pretty decent detective, and I have his number if you want to contact him.” said Noemi.

“That’d be great! Thank you!” replied Jo.

The next day, Detective Sam Parker was asking Abby some questions, just to he got a clear view of the case.

“It was a beautiful day, the sun was shining, birds were chirping, it was lovely, so I thought that it would be a great day to wear my red ruby necklace. So Bindy, Noemi, Val and I went into H and M, one of my favorite stores at the mall, I picked out an outfit to try on, so we all headed to the dressing room, the necklace didn’t go with the outfit, so I took it off and I set it on the shelf in the dressing room, then I came out to show my friends the outfit, it didn’t take very long, probably about 3 or 4 minutes to convince me to buy it, but when I came back into the dressing room the necklace was gone!”

“Thank you.” replied the detective, “besides you and your friends, there were only 3 other people in the store besides the cashier, I have actually set up interviews with all of them, so if you will excuse me, I need to go get to those interviews.”

First up he interviewed her friends.

“I have good news for two of you, but bad news for the other one. We actually found a hair on the shelf in the dressing room, and since you guys all have different hair colors, two of you are innocent.”

“Who are they?” asked Bindi, hoping she was innocent.

“Well the hair was brown, so Val, Noemi, you’re free to go, but Bindi, I’m afraid I will need to ask you some more questions.”

Val and Noemi left, but Bindi sat there, sweating so much she could hardly talk.

“When Jo was in the dressing room, you left, but where did you go?” questioned the detective.

“I went to the bathroom, before that me and the girls had gone to Starbucks, and that molten chocolate frappuccino, or was it a molten chocolate latte, anyways it just went right through me.” answered Bindi, still sweating.

“Have you ever had a reason to be jealous of Jo?” asked the detective,

“Well she did beat me in the presidential elections in Middle School, but that’s in the past. But really, what reason did she have to participate? I was more liked by the entire grade, and had way better grades than her, I still think that teacher told us to vote, and then she really chose the president, oh if I could go back to that day, I would find out what really happened, I bet she bribed the teacher, with all the money her parents had, she probably did!” replied Bindi.

“Well thank you Miss, you may leave now.” the detective told Bindi.

“Thank you.” replied Bindi, and with that, she left.

Jake Onstott was the next suspect to enter the detective’s office. The detective started,

“Did you ever enter the fitting rooms when you were in H and M?”

“No I was just inside protecting myself from the rain, I had just purchased new Sperrys from the Sperry store just down the path, and I didn’t want them to be wet right after wearing them.”

“But Sir, their boating shoes, they can get wet.”

Oh right, they were, um, sorry Pink Yoga pants for my girlfriend, she loves Pink.

“Okay, did you even know Jo? Like did you guys have some sort of relationship?”

“No” replied Jake, “I don’t even recognize the name.”

“Thank you Sir, you may leave now” said the detective

The last two suspects to enter were Owen and Raleigh. They were a couple who were also in that store.

“For what reason were you guys in the store?” asked the detective.

“Oh,” started Raleigh, “he was just buying me some new clothes, like any great boyfriend would do.”

“Does this happen often?” asked the detective.

”No, his family doesn’t have a lot of money, but I was very glad to hear that he was going to take me shopping.”

“Owen,”started the detective “have you ever been in relationships with any other girls?”

“Well, in Middle School I did date this one girl named Johanna Smith, she was gorgeous, but I hear that now she’s off dating somebody else, I wonder what ever happened to her…”

Raleigh quickly joined the conversation,

“But you didn’t love her more than you love me right!”

“Of course not!” replied Owen. “I will always love you no matter what.”

“Okay, thank you, you two, you are free to leave.”

After the interviews detective Sam Parker had figured out who did it? Did you?

Solution:

Bindi was innocent. Yes she was very jealous of Jo, but that’s just because she still was mad at her for beating her in the presidential elections all the way back in Middle School. She did leave, but she actually had gone to the bathroom, they really did stop at Starbucks, and she really did get a mocha frappuccino, she just gets frappe and latte mixed up, and she sweats when she gets nervous. When she was getting interviewed, she was very nervous, she didn’t want to say the wrong thing and then be put in jail because of it.

Owen and Raleigh were innocent, his family didn’t have a lot of money, but he had recently gotten a new job, so since Raleigh didn’t have much money either, he decided it would be nice and be a great boyfriend and buy her a new outfit. H and M doesn’t cost much, so he thought that would be the perfect place to shop. He did date Johanna Smith in Middle School, but really didn’t know what happened to her, and had no clue that she was the victim of the crime, he never was or has been the brightest kid in school after all.

Jake was the real culprit. He wasn’t hiding in H and M, it was a beautiful day outside, he was in there to make sure that other people would be in there so that he wouldn’t be a huge suspect. Another thing, the store Pink isn’t even in Tanger Outlets, and about his girlfriend, Jake was making that up, he hoping that the detective would be dumb enough to buy his lie. And he was right about not knowing who Jo was, but he did have an exact idea of what the jewel looked like, and where it would be at what time. But don’t worry, Jake was arrested, and put on trial, they ruled that he was guilty, so he had two days before he was going to be taken to jail, every thing was going to turn out well, well that’s what everybody thought, then this happened…

Before Jake got to jail, he got a call, it wasn’t one of his contacts, but he knew exactly who it was….

“We did it!” the voice said, “right now I am on a plane to London, England to exchange that priceless jewel for the millions dollars it was worth. After 3 days, I will come back, break you out of jail, and give you your half, then I will have prepared fake identities for us. We will leave our phones in the United States so that we won’t be able to be tracked, fly to Rome, Italy, then travel by train to Venice, where we will fly to Luxembourg, where we will live among the rich for the rest of our lives.”

“Sounds great,” replied Jake, “I can’t believe our plan actually worked, and you don’t have to call me Jake anymore, just call me by my real name, Victor Jewels.”

Thematic Essay

Thematic Essay

The book that I am doing a report of will be Swindle by Gordan Korman. This book is about two boys who accidently sell a baseball card to a pawn shop owner. This guy totally rips them off and pays them barely any money. This card would definitely benefit Griffin’s family because they are struggling financially. So Griffin gathers his friends and forms one of his crazy plans to help out his family. This book has taught me so much about how never to give up, how always to persevere, even if plan A might fail, there is always a plan B.

 

I learned this lesson in one instance through Griffin’s dad. He was a struggling inventor, and he tried really hard to nail his one invention. All he ever wanted was to succeed. He wanted his family to be happy. And I really like how in this book, he kept trying. He never gave up on his hope to be an inventor, he had an education and he could’ve gone in a completely different direction with his life, but he kept on trying to achieve his goal of being a successful inventor.

 

I also learned this lesson through Griffins best friend, Ben. Griffin was so crazy, and Ben was always there to support him. He was okay with going into the old and abandoned house and spending the night there. He could’ve easily given up and not wanted to be his friend anymore, he could’ve easily gone with a different crowd and hang out with people that are “normal” but he didn’t he stuck by Griffin.

I learned this lesson mostly from Griffin himself. He was such a persistent person, but for the right reasons. He wanted to help out his family so bad. It was one of those things for him that were super important, that would be one of the moments in his life that he would feel accomplished. He wanted to do this so bad that he got all of his friends together, to form a plan that was so crazy that it just might work. I love that quality of his, and I think that if I would learn to be more persistent for the right reasons, than I would be a better person.

 

This book has taught me so much about how never to give up, how always to persevere, even if plan A might fail, there is always a plan B. In conclusion, this book has taught me a lot. I learned to never give up, like Griffins dad. I learned to stick with my choices and how to persevere from Ben. And I learned if plan A fails, there is always some way to make a plan B, and I learned that I have to be persistent for the right reasons, not for the wrong ones, and I learned that lesson from Griffin.

 

Descriptive Writing

Descriptive Writing

The suitcase card reminds me of going to Family Camp with my entire family over Labor Day weekend. It was such a fun weekend and my entire family enjoyed it. We were feed, we played, and swam our legs of. The food was delicious. My meal usually included some sort of salad, the tangy, sweet, yet delicious dressing filled my mouth with each bite. Me and my cousin usually finished breakfast, lunch or dinner early and came back to the cabin to play volleyball, luckily the volleyball court was only 3 steps away from our cabin. With every set the sand from the ball filled my eyes, and a sharp pain came then left quickly. We also had the opportunity to swim in Lake Michigan, and we took advantage of every day. We swam, surfed and crashed against the waves, and we all really enjoyed it. Overall it was a great weekend and I believe we will return next year for more fun.

 

The globe card reminds me of time I went to California for 3 weeks. My grandparents live out in San Diego, California, and we were planning on attending the Vineyard Conference in Anaheim, California. The first week it was just my family and my grandparents, we swam in the clear, lukewarm, chlorine filled water while the hot sun caused our bodies to sweat. The second week my mom, dad, younger sister and I traveled to Anaheim, California to attend the Vineyard Conference. I remember one time when we went to Olive Garden for dinner (one of my favorite restaurants.) and I ordered Zeppoles. When I bit into my first ever zeppole, flavors filled my mouth. There was the grainy cinnamon and sugar mixture on top of a fluffy, perfectly baked cloud that tasted like a elephant ear on 4th of July. The next week my cousins who I have never meet came and we went to DisneyLand together. The rides and the experience are one that I will never ever forget.

 

The American Flag card reminds me of this past summer when we had a huge firework show in our neighborhood. Every year in our neighborhood every house gives some money, and we all have this giant potluck and a huge firework show when the sun sets. This year I decided to bring a dessert, and I wanted to pump up my cupcakes from last year. So I decided to make 2 dozen cupcakes but have an american flag made out of strawberries and blueberries cover the entire face of the cupcakes. When I bit into my first cupcake, the sweet, sugar filled buttercream perfectly balanced the rich, chocolatey yet slightly tart cupcake, and the strawberry on top made the whole thing come together. And the fireworks show was amazing. The colorful, bright, loud, yet beautiful fireworks filled the sky as they were shot of one by one into the pitch black sky. Overall it was a great night and it’s going to be hard to top next year.

Theme Writing

“Therefore everyone who hears these words of mine and puts them into practice is like a wise man who built his house on the rock.  The rain came down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against that house; yet it did not fall, because it had its foundation on the rock. -Matthew 7:24-25

It is a Zeeland Christian tradition that every year, the 7th graders go out to Camp Rodger in Belding, Michigan, and we pick the theme for our 8th grade year. This camp is a lot more serious,  but it helps us to focus on God, and overall it is an experience to remember to pick the theme for our final year at Zeeland Christian. Our theme this year definitely impacts me as an 8th grader in Zeeland Christian, but it equally impacts me as a Christian living in this world.

This verse means a lot to me as an 8th grader here at Zeeland Christian. Being in middle school is a hard time for most people. However, this verse lets us know that when there are struggles in this life, which there will be, God will be there with us if we have our foundation on Him. I think that this verse will help 6th graders know that even though they might be struggling because a friend is in a different homeroom or maybe there teacher isn’t the one that they wanted, or maybe there just a little scared about the whole Middle School thing, that things are going to be okay. And I think that if they can let God do the work, and that things are going to be okay, that they can make sure that they have a great overall Middle School experience. I am very happy with the theme this year, I think that it will inspire and give comfort to a lot of kids in this school.

This verse means a lot to me as a Christian in this world in general, not just an 8th grader at Zeeland Christian. This verse is fairly simple to apply in Middle School, but in the world, we do have struggles, but not every single day of your life, so how can you apply this to your life when everything’s going well. This verse says that whoever hears these words of mine and puts them into practice, is like the wise man who built his house on the rock. Some of the things that would be “his worlds” come from Deuteronomy 6:4-9, Love the Lord your God with all your heart, with all your soul, and with all your strength, and also love your neighbor as yourself.  Without saying it directly this verse tells us that we have to put his words into practice. The question was, what does this verse mean to you as a Christian in the world, my answer, putting his words into practice.

Our theme this year definitely impacts me as an 8th grader in Zeeland Christian, but it equally impacts me as a Christian living in this world. Overall, I think that this verse can be used as comfort, and also a wake up call to do the things that God has told us to do. I hope people are inspired by this verse, and I pray that we would listen to what this verse has told us to do.