Wow, Jordyn I really liked your story idea and the characters. My favorite character would definitely have to be Ann. Ann finds out she is moving away which is very sad. But, also I relate to Ann a lot! When I was exactly her age, I had to move away from my home state of Indiana to come to Michigan, and even though I was sad then, I am happy now that it happened! I also liked how you decided to give her very nice friends to help her with her tough situation, because moving away from friends is always very hard. I really liked how all of the characters had different personalities and how they were all just their own person, not alike but not too different. You did a very great job at choosing characters that will help balance the story. Keep up the good work!!! Have a fun weekend too!
Wow, Jordyn I really liked your story idea and the characters. My favorite character would definitely have to be Ann. Ann finds out she is moving away which is very sad. But, also I relate to Ann a lot! When I was exactly her age, I had to move away from my home state of Indiana to come to Michigan, and even though I was sad then, I am happy now that it happened! I also liked how you decided to give her very nice friends to help her with her tough situation, because moving away from friends is always very hard. I really liked how all of the characters had different personalities and how they were all just their own person, not alike but not too different. You did a very great job at choosing characters that will help balance the story. Keep up the good work!!! Have a fun weekend too!