It went well when me and Eli worked on it. It looked like it might work.
What didn’t go well was when peter decided to touch the tower, and he broke it.
I didn’t really have a favorite part of it, I guess the best part would have to be the first part when it actually worked.
When peter dropped our tower
Jacob Spaulding
Mrs. Roskamp
8a,La
12 February
One morning a 30 year old man named Chuck with his 5 year old son Jake so where walking through the county fair that comes with all of the exciting rides, like the ferris wheel, go carts, bumper cars, merry go round. Well they had been there for hours eating elephant ears, funnel cakes, deep fried oreos, cotton candy and all the junkiest foods that they could find, and after that they decided to go on all the craziest rides in the whole fair to see who would throw up first. Fortunately no one threw up and no one got barf on them. Chuck gave Jake a lot of money to buy any food that he wanted, the only thing that he wouldn’t let his son do was try to win a 6 foot tall gorilla, When the night was coming to a close there were about to get on the ferris wheel when chuck noticed some suspicious couple behind them that he noticed was staring at Jake. When chuck started to get on their seats he realised that he was the only one getting on their lift and he looked around all over to see if he could find his son running around, then he noticed that the couple that was looking suspicious was also gone that the first thought was that they had taken his son, and his first thought was that his wife was going to kill him for first of all bring their child to the fair which she didn’t want them to go to anyway. So he decided to go to the top of the wheel to see if he could see his son just wondering away or at worse if he would see that couple taking him off acting like he was theirs so they could get out of the fair without being noticed. But when he got to the top the operator stopped it for him to see if he could him Jake. When he got to the top he couldn’t believe what he saw.
What happened was that when he got to the top he did see his son except he wasn’t being kidnapped by the couple, actually the only reason why he could see the couple when he disappeared was that they thought it would be too late by the time that they got gone and that they had to make it home in time. What he actually saw was his son carrying a 6 foot gorrilla.