We Need To Protect God’s Creation

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Posted by bgerritsma | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on March 22, 2013

 

 

 

Many people don’t know but I’ve come to know that God’s creation is being cut down, polluted, and destroyed twenty four seven. And what are we doing about it…Nothing! We just keep on do exactly what we’ve been doing and thats what bothers me.

We need to save God’s creation because of global warming. Global warming is one of the things that bothers me most is global warming and I think that there should be a global warning, because not so many even know about it and most of the ones that do don’t take action and thats another thing that bothers me, this is urgent and yet people act like it not even happing! I think it like the titanic when they thought it was unsinkable and they were warned about ten times about icebergs and you know what they did… They sped up! Talk about careless! And you know the rest, I think the world is like that. We’ve been warned already, the rest is our future.

We need to save God’s creation because I once saw a pipe in Grand Rapids and that had this nasty green slimy froth coming out of it into the Grand River and I don’ think that half the people walking by even noticed it! If the green froth flows into the Grand River and the Grand River flows into lake Michigan and ware do we get most of our drinking water? Lake Michigan and I don’t know of any one (myself included) that would want to drink green froth!

Some People Rent there house and some times when the people who rent the house come out and the house is a wreck and sometimes they don’t even pay the rent! We are some what like that. We need to save God’s creation because we aren’t paying to live in God’s awesome creation and we don’t have to, but God does want us to take care of the earth. What if you made some thing out of clay and it was absolutely perfect not a thing wrong with it and then some one came along and smashed it in to peaces you would be so mad. We kind of did that with God’s creation he wants us to stop.

We need to save God’s creation because we cut down 48,000 square feet of forest every secant! Most of it is from the rain forest and guess what 48,000 square feet of forest isn’t growing back every secant! just to give you an idea of how much that is it’s one football field every secant thats 2,880,000 square feet every minute 172,800,000 square feet every hour WE NEED TO STOP!

We all need to take better care of God’s creation here are some tips. Reuse reduce recycle heres how you reuse at the store use reusable bags, reduce, don’t buy things that wont last for example me brother got a 2.00 bow and arrow in 5 days the string was falling off and an arrow was broken. Recycle thats easy recycle whats recyclable. Only you can save God’s creation.

 

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Comments (1)

Bradley,

Have you thought about being the President of the United States? With this kind of passion, you’d be phenomenal!

I love the connections you make with the Titanic and renting a house. Amazing!

You have great information and support for your thesis; however, you need to more clearly define your supporting points in topic sentences. You need to start each paragraph with, “We need to protect God’s creation because…” For example, “We need to protect God’s creation because the earth continues to get warmer with the effects of global warming.” After the topic sentence, you will add your evidence/facts/stories to the paragraph.

Also, make sure you are double checking your spelling, capitalization, and overall punctuation.

After a little polishing, you’re going to have an AMAZING essay. Keep up the amazing work!

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